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Act I: Beginning of the Decline
Chapter Nine: Night of the Spectres (Part 3)
Page 9
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The night hasn't ended.
EDIT: Change the speech bubble placement for clarity. Thanks Slaskia!
Chapter Nine: Night of the Spectres (Part 3)
Page 9
Contents Page | Previous Chapter | Previous Page | Next Page | Chapter ~ Coming Soon
The night hasn't ended.
EDIT: Change the speech bubble placement for clarity. Thanks Slaskia!
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Annnd hear it comes....
Just a tip: in panel three it would have been better if the speech bubble was at the top of the panel. Where it is now it blends in with Victus' shirt and I didn't even see it until the second read through. Plus the flow of the panel would be better, imo. Right now, it reads like Victus noticed the guard come in before he said anything. With the adjustment, it will be clear he got Victus' attention verbally before looking at him.
Just a tip: in panel three it would have been better if the speech bubble was at the top of the panel. Where it is now it blends in with Victus' shirt and I didn't even see it until the second read through. Plus the flow of the panel would be better, imo. Right now, it reads like Victus noticed the guard come in before he said anything. With the adjustment, it will be clear he got Victus' attention verbally before looking at him.